Stealing Infinity
I read this book because it was a gift. That isn't to say that it was a bad gift. I love being given books I have never read or would never consider reading. It broadens my horizons and keeps me from reading the same things each time.
This book was a letdown. Not because it was a YA book, but because of so many little things. I will explain my main issues with the text individually to help illustrate my low score.
Synopsis:
Brooding and burnt out from the stress of her first 17 years, Natasha has given up on life. Grades in the toilet, Nat has very little going for her. This isn't any news to her. Her life hasn't been the same since her father decided to leave her and her mother all alone. Unable to deal with that abandonment, Nat's mom collapses into herself. Natasha is forced to help her mom pay bills, while also giving up on the life she imagined for herself. With no foreseeable future, Natasha has become a social pariah in her high school with only her best friend, Mason for company.
That is until Elodie breezes into her high school. She is dressed in all of the designer clothes that Natasha wishes she could afford. Not only that, but she is kind to Nat. Mason warns her that Eoldie is a bad influence and will be Natasha's downfall. With nothing left to lose, Mason's warnings are forgotten and Natasha throws caution The unlikely friends skip school to go shopping for clothes Nat can't afford and eventually end up at a rather weird exclusive club.
After being framed for shoplifting by Elodie, Natasha is faced with an impossible choice; leave everything she knows to attend an unknown boarding school or continue living her life with no future. Presented with the fact that her mother will be cared for and not worry about money while Natasha is at school causes her to begrudgingly agree.
Whisked away by a model-level attractive boy, Natasha finds herself thrown into a quirky world of luxury. Designer clothes and coveted works of art are now part of her every day. Add in her gorgeous classmates who all could be models, and Natasha is struggling to figure out why she was selected for this school. Her benefactor is none other than Arthur Blackstone, a world-renowned billionaire and art collector.
Yet, something isn't adding up. Where does all of this wealth come from? It isn't long before Natasha figures out the true purpose of Grey Wolf Academy, time travel. She and her classmates have been brought to this remote boarding school to be time-traveling thieves for Arthur. Not tasked with traveling through time to steal from kings and queens, Natasha wonders if something more nefarious is at work here.
My Thoughts:
This book does a decent job of looking at how morality can shift over time. It also shows how morals can be influenced by one's financial situation. Natasha has dealt with a lot in her 17 years. However, she is not the poster child for our students struggling at home. If anything, she is an example of what we do not want our students to do. Natasha throws her life away and does so willingly.
It isn't that she throws her academic future away, she also acts as the poster child for the phrase "We accept the love we think we deserve." The love interest in this book, Braxton, essentially admits to stalking her. Most women would find that extremely offputting. Not Natasha! She falls for Braxton and falls hard. It is alluded to that they sleep together, adding to the toxic relationship between the two. Natasha admits that she hasn't been in a serious relationship... EVER! But it is okay for her to fall into bed with her stalker. As a teacher (former), I would be hesitant to hand this to anyone younger than 15. The last thing we need to do is idolize these kinds of relationships. YA Literature already does enough of that for us.
My main issues:
1) Over-explaining random aspects.
2) Lack of true relationships
3) Romantic Relationships
4) Writing Style
I will talk about these a bit later. First, we need to look at the discussions that this book presents.
- What builds a trusting relationship?
- What was your initial impression of Natasha? Braxton? Elodie? How did this opinion evolve as you read through the book?
- When a crime doesn't have any direct consequences, is it wrong?
- When forced into a position that requires trust amongst all parties and you have none, how does it impact decision-making?
- How far would you go for your family? Is there something you wouldn't do if it meant your family would have a better life?
Suggested Student Age: 15 and up
Warnings: Alcohol use, kissing, sexual encounters (off camera), parental abandonment, attempted rape, and sword violence
***** SPOILERS*******
Issue One: Over-explaining Random Aspects
This author clearly did a lot of research for this book. I am not saying this because there was a lot of well-placed information. This book is guilty of one of the greatest writing sins, information dumping. The first 5 pages are just an info dump about Numerology. This holds such a minimal place in the plot of the book. Why was this necessary? Tarot Cards played a much larger role, but there was no information dump about them.
Later in the book, they travel to 1745 Paris, France. There is easily a page of description about a fountain. A FOUNTAIN. Not only that but every piece of clothing that Natasha wears is described in depth. I don't care about every dress she wears. We could have shortened this 458-page long book by quite a bit. I understand that the author is trying to reel in teenage girls. However, it bogs down the writing and makes it feel vapid.
Issue Two: Lack of True Relationships
Natasha is not truly connected to anyone in her life. Her father disappears/ leaves her family. After that, her mother shuts down and cares very little about her. Given the chance to ship her daughter off to a boarding school in exchange for money, she jumps at it. Sure, she gets some "reassurances," but they are minimal at best.
She is friends with Mason and Elodie. Elodie frames her for theft and attempts to kill her more than once. She actively works to destroy Natasha's relationship with Braxton. Elodie tries to ruin any possible friendships between Natasha and the other students at Grey Wolf Academy. Remember Mason now. He does absolutely NOTHING to stop Elodie from hurting Natasha. When Natasha is in a downward spiral, he just tells her to do better. She gets arrested and he just stands by looking disappointed.
Natasha's relationship with Braxton is toxic and questionable. He stalks her and she, for some reason, finds this hot. Leading me to issue #3.
Issue Three: Romantic Relationships
This book acts like a romantic relationship is the only thing that would keep Natasha at Grey Wolf Academy. Dude, you get to travel through time! You get to wear designer clothes and learn amazing skills. This plot wasn't any better when a half-baked romantic relationship was added.
Braxton tells Natasha that he spent months researching her life. He is in love with her before even meeting her. He finds nothing wrong with his role in tricking/ framing Natasha. He thinks everything is acceptable because it worked towards his end goal, which is being with Natasha. Does Natasha get a say in that? Sure ..... Not really.
It isn't even just about their relationship. With a minuscule student body, everyone dates and sleeps with everyone. It is a terrible cesspool of teenage hormones and nasty empty relationships.
Elodie acts as the queen bee, sleeping with every boy who looks in her direction. Not really a good example of healthy teenage relationships.
Issue Four: Writing Style
This writing style is childish and reads more like a Wattpad fanfiction. If I didn't know any better, I would say this was written by a teenager. This does not read like a seasoned published author. I only finished this book because was praying the characters would get better. None of them did.